BLUE MURDER
It may be that I’ve missed the joke with Blue Murder. The author was one of those pulp fiction writers who could type as fast as he could think. He published some 3,000 short stories in his career, many in Spicy Detective. Several collections of his stories have recently been reprinted. His fans today appreciate his over-the-top use of Chandleresque prose. But there’s a question whether he was engaging in parody or just writing badly. I’m guessing the latter.
Blue Murder by Robert Leslie Bellem. Phoenix Books (1938), 256 pp.
Duke Pizzatello works as an investigator for Joe and Steve Kohlar’s detective agency in Los Angeles. He’s told to find evidence that Nelia Mason’s husband has been cheating on her. Nelia is interested in a more permanent separation than divorce. When she arranges an incident in which Duke shoots the husband in his wooden leg, Duke wants off the case. But then Gertie Kohlar, Joe’s wife, tells Duke that she’s pregnant, he’s the father, and she needs money for an abortion. Nelia is his only source of ready cash. Dixie Parker, a secretary for the agency, urges Duke not to get involved with Nelia again. But he does – and soon discovers her husband’s dead body and the hacked up remains of an unidentifiable woman. Duke becomes the prime suspect in the double homicide.
This is a tough-guy novel that relies almost completely on plot twists. Duke, the protagonist and narrator, is neither sympathetic nor perceptive. At best he’s amusingly irresponsible as he bounces from one episode to another. The women in the story are notable primarily for their flimsy outfits, though Dixie adds a ridiculous determination to keep Duke out of trouble. The male characters are hardly developed at all. Bellem might have been able to get all this to work if he had kept the plot under control. But too much of what happens just makes no sense. The book was perhaps mildly titillating seventy years ago. Today it’s likely to appeal only to less discriminating fans of noir fiction.
There seems to be a general agreement that the two best Hollywood novels are The Day of the Locust (1939) by Nathanael West and What Makes Sammy Run? (1941) by Budd Schulberg. The number three spot is still up for grabs. I’d like to nominate My Face for the World to See, which produces a greater emotional impact than either of the top two. It got wonderful reviews when it was published but seems to have faded entirely from view in the past fifty years. I am, incidentally, casting Campbell Scott and Katherine Heigl in the movie adaptation.
What intrigued me about this book was its publisher. I’m not talking about the paperback publisher, which labeled it a “Dell Romance” and put some smooching medicos on the cover. I mean the original, hard cover publisher, Vanguard Press. Vanguard put out a lot of left-wing books in the 1930s, both fiction and non-fiction. It published James T. Farrell’s Young Lonigan, a Marxist critique of the lower middle-class, in the same year as Hospital Nocturne. So I figured I needed to check it out. (Note to the eagle-eyed: Dell actually did misspell the author’s middle name.)
I suppose there are statistics on this somewhere, but from what I’ve been reading I’d say middle-class people in the 1950s did a lot of drinking. Five cocktails before dinner were nothing. A couple of bottles of wine during the meal had no impact. A few more shots afterward produced only a pleasant glow. In Love after Five the protagonist, a business executive, at least dimly understands that he sometimes drinks too much. No one faults him for it, presumably because that's exactly what everyone expects.
Sometimes authors should have more confidence in their narrative abilities. In Valley Boy Theodore Pratt paints a masterful picture of a boy neglected by his parents and seeking affection elsewhere. Few readers are likely to overlook or misunderstand the boy’s problem. Even so, Pratt has another character spell it out. And she does this early in the book, at a time when other interpretations were still possible. “Steve,” says Kit on p. 31, “that boy is starved for love.” This would have been the right time for an editor to get out a red pencil and chop out this needless piece of dialogue.
Jimmy Starr (1904-1990) apparently was something like the protagonist of this book -- a well-connected writer who produced work with the public in mind. Arriving in Hollywood in 1919, he became known primarily as a columnist, but he also worked over the years as a screenwriter and publicist. Google Books shows some 120 references to him, usually in biographies of movie stars. His books include a collection of Hollywood short stories (1926) and two other mysteries with reporter Joe Medford (1944 and 1950).
Cleve Adams (1895?-1949) was one of a group of struggling Los Angeles mystery writers in the 1930s who wrote for the pulps and hoped for a larger audience. He broke through with the publication of his first book, Sabotage, in 1940. Its success led to another eleven novels in the next four years. One recounted further exploits of Bill Rye, the central character in Dig Me a Grave. The pseudonym “John Spain” was used three times, though I don’t know why. Adams didn’t publish any novels after 1944, but three of his drafts were completed by Robert Leslie Bellem after Adams’ death.
I bought Desert Town early last year but was reluctant to start it because of lukewarm reviews. I got the impression it was a glorified piece of magazine fiction. In fact, its first rendering was as a serial in Collier’s. But when I realized that nearly all of its characters were unscrupulous, I understood that it was a noir tale in an unusual setting. The novel was snapped up by the movies soon after publication. The A-list film version, Desert Fury, written by Robert Rossen and A. I. Bezzerides, came out in 1947.
An author who wants to make a point in his or her novel must take care to maintain the coherence of the story. An egregious manipulation of situations and characters undercuts the message by throwing the writer’s integrity into question. Incorrigible shows what happens when an author’s determination to make a statement overwhelms his need to tell a story. Karl Brown (1896-1990) had, incidentally, a long career in Hollywood, first as cinematographer and cameraman, then as a writer and director of B movies.